TOEFL対策コラム

簡単なスコアアップのコツ! 回答文(エッセイ)を添削してもらう


TOEFL Writing のスコアアップに欠かせないのは、

自分が書いたエッセイを英語の先生に添削してもらうことです。


できるだけたくさんのエッセイを書いて、専門の先生に添削してもらいましょう。

マイチューター講師に添削してもらう場合はこちら
(ご利用いただくには、添削専用ポイント又はライティング特訓ゼミのポイントが必要です)


実際の試験同様に時間を計って以下の時間配分でエッセイを書いてください。

5分 ― ブレインストーミング、アウトライン作り

20分 ― エッセイを書く(序論、本論、結論)

5分   ― 見直しと修正


練習問題 (10問)


マイチューター講師に添削してもらう場合はこちら
(ご利用いただくには、添削専用ポイント又はライティング特訓ゼミのポイントが必要です)




1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


2. Some people prefer working for a very large company that has several hundred employees. Others prefer working for a small company where they know all of their co-workers. Which do you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Leaders must pay attention to the advice and opinions of other people.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Every child should be raised in a home with two parents.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


5. Some people believe that in high school, boys should be in classes with only boys, and girls should be in classes with only girls. Other people believe that high school classes should be coeducational, with students of both genders studying together. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


6. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Technological progress has made us lazy.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


7. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Children should always be happy, so they should be sheltered from unhappiness.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


8. Some people think that science and technology are most important to society. Others think that art-, literature, and music are most important. Which position do you favor? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


9. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is always important to support your friends even if they do something illegal.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


10. When governments make decisions, some people think it is most important to consider the effect of the decision on the economy. Others think the effect on the environment is more important. Which position do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

「添削くん」受講者自身が用意した問題を投稿する方法(例:TOEFL Task 2)

過去問など、受講者ご自身が用意した問題の解答文を問題の種類・質問を添えて投稿できます。 解答文の文字数により添削結果をお届けする際ポイントが消化されます(~180 words – 1ポイント、 181~350 words – 2ポイント、351~500 words – 3ポイント)


FREE Writing (受講者が問題を用意する)投稿の手順

1 . マイページ 「添削くん」をクリック



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2. 注意書きを確認して「OK」をクリック

_________________________________________________________________

3.  名前、メールアドレスを入力、FREE WRITINGを選んで 「Next」をクリック


_________________________________________________________________


4.  直接回答を入力を選び 問題の種類(例:TOEFL Independent Task)

と 問題文を入力した後で解答文(エッセイ)を入力して「Next」をクリック

* 「直接入力」の他にファイルを投稿する方法もございます。


自分で用意した英文(ビジネスレターなど)を直接入力(投稿)

★ IELTS,TOEFL、英検などは問題文を上段入稿ボックスに入稿してください。

★ 回答文を下段入稿ボックスに入稿してください

(例:TOEFL Independent Task (種類)の問題と回答文を投稿) 



自分で用意したIELTSなどの問題と回答文を1つのファイルで投稿する。

★ 投稿できるファイルは1つだけです。問題文を忘れずに投稿してください。


▮ 「Yes 質問ページに進み、回答をファイルで送信する」を選択して、Next ボタンをクリックする。


▮ 「ファイルを選択」ボタンをクリックして、ファイル(PDFなど)を選択します。

_________________________________________________________________

5.  講師を指名しない(No)を選んで 「Submit」をクリック

簡単なスコアアップのコツ! 見直しポイント(3) – センテンス構成・多様性・単語


TOEFL ライティング Independent Task の解答時間は30分です。

5分でエッセイの構成を計画、20分でエッセイを書き、残り5分で見直し

といった時間配分を心がけてください。


ここでは、ポイントアップに欠かせない「見直し- センテンス構成・多様性・単語

について例文のチェックを通して説明していきます

自分か書いたエッセイのパラグラフを構成するセンテンスの多様性、構成、語彙

をチェック、修正することでスコアーアップをしてください。


以下3つのパラグラフを読んで、構成、多様性、単語をより適切なものに修正してみてください。


  1.  I decide not to get married two years ago. I could finish my university studies. My father he wanted me to get married. My parents they allow me decide. I had married, I have to stay in my husband’s home. Because in my culture, married woman, she has a duty to her husband, it’s our tradition. I choose finishing my degree instead. I will to be a graduate student in Toronto. I will earning my master’s degree in business economics.


2.  I prefer students should have several short vacations throughout the year instead to one long vacation. Students work hardly and need a brake often. Students in country have several short holidays while every seasons. On the contrast, American students   have one long vacation in a summer. I read a paper say that American students forgetting what they learned because the long vacation. This why I belief several short vacations is good than one long vacation.


3.   There are many advantage in having friends that different to me. Such as my friend who is from Turkey learns me alot about his culture. His family is so big and my family is not big. As a result, I like to go to his house to visiting his family. I enjoy the good food. I enjoy the talking because is really cool and interesting. Other friend is an artist. My friend makes pictures and does other arts. It’s really cool. In conclusion, my artist friend is not alike me, I learn good things about art from him. 


▮ エッセイに役立つ単語


advantage    /    contribute /  examine    /   prefer  /  benefit /  controversy / factor    /     produce /  cause    /    dilemma  /  influence  /  provide  / characteristic     /  effect / issue /   solution    /   consequence / essential  /  necessary  /      view    


● 修正されたエッセイを見て自分の修正と比較してください。


1.

 I decided not to get married two years ago so I could finish my university studies. My father wanted me to get married, but my parents allowed me to decide. If I had married, I would have had to stay in my husband’s home because in my culture, a married woman has a duty to her husband. It is our tradition. I chose to finish my degree instead. I will be a graduate student in Toronto, where I will earn my master’s degree in business economics.


2. 

I think students should have several short vacations throughout the year instead of one long vacation because they work hard and need breaks often. Students in my country have several short holidays during every season. In contrast, American students have one long vacation in the summer. I read a paper saying that American students forget what they learn because of the long vacation. This is why I believe several short vacations are better than one long vacation.


3. 

There are many advantages in having friends that are different from me. For example, my friend from Turkey teaches me a lot about his culture. His family is very big, and my family is not big, so I like to go to his house to visit his family. I enjoy the good food and the conversation because it is really wonderful and interesting. Another friend is an artist who paints pictures and creates other art that is very good. My artist friend is not like me, and I learn interesting things about art from him.

TOEFL スピーキング Perfect Master (Basic) Q6 レッスンの流れ

TOEFL スピーキング Question 6 学習ステップ


マイチューター 「TOEFL スピーキング Perfect Master (Basic)」

カリキュラムでは、Question 6  対策として、試験問題に比べ、


簡単なトピックとやや短めな講義を使った様々な問題に


チャレンジしていただきます。


以下の学習ステップで、効果的、実践的な練習を繰り返し、スコアアップへ導きます。


目標スコアー 61点(Speakingセクション 15点)を目指す受講者に適した

カリキュラムになっています。



TOEFL初級者(例:英検準2級以下、TOEIC 500点以下)で

リスニングが苦手な方はリスニングのない「TOEFL特訓ゼミ Starter」

カリキュラムからの受講をお勧めいたします。


学習ステップ

ステップ   1  リスニング &メモ取り アカデミックなトピックの講義を聞き概要をメモします。

ステップ   2   解答の構成  メモを使ってKey sentencesを書き出します。

ステップ  3   解答のスピーキング  質問に対し、メモを参考に解答します。

ステップ   4   比較と復習  模範解答を聞いて、自分の解答と比較します。  
 


▮ Listen

STEP 1 | Listening & Note Taking | Listen to a lecture , and take notes.

スクリプト

Have you heard about the positive externality effect? The positive externality effect is kind of a difficult theory to explain. Basically, it means that certain actions in society can help society as well as the individual. Let’s see. A common example is the flu shot. People can help themselves by getting a flu shot and keeping healthy. They might save some money by not missing work, avoiding the doctor and not having to pay for medicine. They also help society as a whole by not getting others sick. This is the positive externality effect. Of course, sometimes people don’t care about society and don’t get their shots. This hurts all of society, not just the individual. The government can help by reducing the costs of the shots or forcing people to get their shots.


メモ取り


Subject: Positive externality effect

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_________________________________________________________________

Detail: Help self and society at same time

_________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

 STEP 2  |Organizing 解答の組み立て| Make key sentences using the above notes


Key sentences

❶ __________________________________________________________

❷ __________________________________________________________

                


STEP 3 |Response 解答| Make your response using the above information.

Question


Using points and examples from the talk, explain the positive externality effect.

Your Response _________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

STEP 6  | Compare 比較 | Listen to a sample response, and compare it with yours.


Sample Response 模範解答

The positive externality effect is a theory that when one person or a group of people is helped by something, the effect that it has on them will positively affect society as a whole. When a person gets a flu shot for example, it helps the person who won’t get the flu and it also helps everyone else that the person might have infected to.



発音トレーニングクラスがスタートしました

┃ Pronunciation Pairs     Second Edition

( 全 50レッスン )


初級上から中級レベルの学習者を対象とする、発音のテキストとして好評のPronunciation Pairsの第2版です。 音と綴りの対応やイントネーション、ストレスはもちろん、英語の音声全般を扱っています。ミニマルペア、対話文、ゲーム、パズル、会話文などを使った豊富なアクティビティを収録しています。

通じやすい発音のコツを知りたい方、流暢さを身に付けたい方、リスニング能力を伸ばしたい方など、英会話に興味がおありならばどなたでもご参加いただけます。

レッスンの詳細はこちら

発音トレーニング Pronunciation Pairs

発音トレーニング Pronunciation Pairs

┃ Pronunciation Pairs     Second Edition

( 全 50レッスン )


こちらのレッスンは、「ポイントプラン」又は「月額制プラン」で受講いただけます。

 お申し込みは「料金案内」からお手続きください。


▮ レッスンの特徴

初級上から中級レベルの学習者を対象とする、発音のテキストとして好評のPronunciation Pairsの第2版です。 音と綴りの対応やイントネーション、ストレスはもちろん、英語の音声全般を扱っています。ミニマルペア、対話文、ゲーム、パズル、会話文などを使った豊富なアクティビティを収録しています。

通じやすい発音のコツを知りたい方、流暢さを身に付けたい方、リスニング能力を伸ばしたい方など、英会話に興味がおありならばどなたでもご参加いただけます。


Contents  & サンプル教材

使用テキスト:Pronunciation Pairs   Second Edition(Cambridge University Press)


テキストは市販教材になります。レッスンでは講師が共有画面でお見せいたしますが、予習復習で必要な場合は受講者ご自身でご用意ください。 




使用テキストAmerican Accent Trainingを使ったレッスンの詳細はこちら


発音トレーニング American Accent Training


American Accent Training  3rd Edition又は4th Edition

(全 50レッスン )

注:レッスン数は目安です。 受講者の進行状況で変わることがございます。


こちらのレッスンは、「ポイントプラン」又は「月額制プラン」で受講いただけます。

 お申し込みは「料金案内」からお手続きください。


▮ レッスンの特徴


American Accent Trainingでは、ただ発音を練習するだけではなく、アメリカ人にとって聞き取りやすい発音を習得することができます。


日本人が無理にネイティブの発音をまねようとしても逆に聞き取りにくくなってしまったり、ネイティブに理解されなくなってしまったりということはよくあります。


当レッスンではそんな間違った発音の覚え方を見なおし、ネイティブと同じ発音を身に付けていくことができます。


Contents (目次)  50レッスン           

注:レッスン数は目安です。 受講者の進行状況で変わることがございます。


使用テキスト:American Accent Training 3rd or 4th Edition ( BARRON’S)


使用テキストPronunciation Pairsを使ったレッスンの詳細はこちら


Introduction: Read This First 

         Preliminary Diagnostic Analysis 

Chapter 1    The American Sound

           Voice Quality                                                                 

           Intonation and Attitude                                    

Chapter 2    Psycholinguistics                                      

Chapter 3    General Pronunciation                                                 

Chapter 4    American Intonation                                         

Chapter 5     Syllable Stress                                                            

Chapter 6    Complex lntonation                                

          Two-Word Phrases                                        

Chapter 7    Phrasing                                            

Chapter 8    The Miracle Technique                       

Chapter 9     Grammar in a Nutshell                        

Chapter 10   Reduced Sounds                                      

Chapter 11   Word Connections                                  

Chapter 12    Cat? Caught? Cut?                                      

Chapter 13   Tee Aitch                                                    

Chapter 14   The American T                                           

Chapter 15   The American R                                             

Chapter 16   The El                                                          

Chapter 17    S or Z?                                                          

        Mid-Point Diagnostic Analysis                                  

Chapters 1-17    Review and Expansion                                        

Chapter 18    More Reduced Sounds                                             

Chapter 19   “V” as in Victory                                                         

Chapter 20    Tense and Lax Vowels                                              

Chapter 21    The Ridge                                                              

Chapter 22    Grammar in a Bigger Nutshell                                   

Chapter 23    Practical Application                                                  

Chapter 24    Nasal Consonants                                                     

Chapter 25    Throaty Consonants      


サンプル教材


                                           

簡単なスコアアップのコツ! 見直しポイント(2) – 適切な単語・表現の使い方


TOEFL ライティング Independent Task の解答時間は30分です。

5分でエッセイの構成を計画、20分でエッセイを書き、残り5分で見直し

といった時間配分を心がけてください。

ここでは、ポイントアップに欠かせない「見直しー  適切な単語・表現の使い方

について説明していきます


Independent taskではアカデミックなエッセイが求められます。

自分か書いたエッセイで使われてる語彙や表現に会話調や、くだけたものが

使われていたら減点対象です。 より、フォーマルで適切な表現に修正することで

スコアーアップをしてください。



▮ Word Choice  適切な単語・表現の使い方


エッセイを読みやすく、効果的に伝えるためには、適切な単語や表現を使う必要があります。

TOEFLライティングが求めるアカデミックなエッセイでは、スラングやくだけた

ボキャブラリーを避けて、親しみのある適切な言葉の選択をしてください。



┃ 適切な単語・表現の練習


不適切: 

Parents have to get kids food and other stuff.

適切 : 

Parents have to provide children with food and other necessities.


不適切:

Join a hobby club helping you make new friends.

適切:

Joining a hobby club will help you make new friends.


不適切:

People driving more careful the children are walking to school.

適切:

People should drive more carefully when children are walking to school.


不適切:

I’m gonna go for a job in broadcast communications.

適切:

I am going to look for a job in broadcast communications.


不適切:

Competitive sports are totally cool.

適切:

Competitive sports benefit us in several important ways.


不適切:

I’m exciting about my decision apply to film school.

適切:

I am excited about my decision to apply to film school.


不適切:

I no like crazy idea.

適切:

I do not like strange or confusing ideas. 

ネイティブのリアル英語  layover  (乗り継ぎの)時間待ち

アメリカ人が毎日使うスラング・イディオムを学ぶ!


ネイティブのように話せるようになるのも”in no time”(あっという間)!


ネイティブのリアル英語  layover   (乗り継ぎの)時間待ち


飛行機の旅でアメリカ人はlayoverという言葉をよく使います。

これは「乗り継ぎの間の待ち時間」という意味です。


あなたなら、フライトを乗り継ぐときの待ち時間をどう過ごしますか? 

空港によっては、ジムやヨガでエクササイズができたり、地元の有名なレストランや

バーがあったりして、案外楽しく時間を使うことができます。

また、あえて乗り継ぎ便を選ぶことで飛行機代が安くなります。


layoverには「途中下車、待ち合わせ」という意味もあります。

日本では電車に当てはめることもできます。

普通、快速、急行、特急などが線路を共有している場合、より早い電

車がどこかの駅で追い抜くことがありますよね。その時、遅いほうが

「待ち合わせのためにしばらく停車する時間」をlayoverstopover

で表すことができます。


また、「乗り継ぎ便」のことをconnecting flightと言います。もしくはtransit/transfer flight

とも言いますので、覚えておいてください。


● a connecting flight

乗り継ぎ便

● Transfer passengers

乗り継ぎの乗客

 I am in transit here.

ここで、乗り継ぎをします。


例文1

Where would you go during a layover in Tokyo

東京での乗り継ぎ間、どこに行きますか?


例文2

I don’t mind changing the airplanes, but I do mind a long layover at the airport. 

飛行機を乗り換えるのは構わないけど、長い乗り継ぎ待ちがいやだよ。


「 layover     (乗り継ぎの)時間待ち 」 習得・攻略


ネイティブのリアル 英語:

On our way to Paris, we had a three-hour layover in Amsterdam.


学校で教わる英語:

On our way to Paris, we had a three-hour stop in Amsterdam.


ネイティブのリアル発音:

On ’ar way da Paris, we had a three-hour layover ’n Amsterdam.


同義語、類義語

a stop in one or more cities when traveling by air.

TOEFL スピーキング Perfect Master (Advance) Q 4 レッスンの流れ

TOEFL スピーキング Question 4 学習ステップ


マイチューター 「TOEFL スピーキング Perfect Master (Advance)」 カリキュラムでは、

Question 4  対策として、やや難易度の高い様々なトピックを使い、

以下の流れで効果的、実践的な練習を繰り返し、スコアアップへ導きます。


目標スコアー 100点(Speakingセクション 25点)を目指す受講者に適した

カリキュラムになっています。


学習ステップ

ステップ   1 リーディング  アカデミックなテーマについての短い課題文を読む

ステップ 2  チェックテスト リーディング内容の理解度をチェックするための質問に解答します。

ステップ 3  リスニング    関連する講義を聞き概要をメモします。

ステップ   4   解答の構成  試験同様の質問に対し、解答へ導くため用された

5つの質問に解答します。

ステップ 5   解答作成   5つの解答を基に解答を作ります。

ステップ 6 スピーキング  時間を計りながら、何も見ずに回答を述べます。

ステップ 7   比較と復習  模範解答を聞いて、自分の解答と比較します。  
 

ステップ  8  自己採点   毎回自己採点を記録してください


▮ Read

STEP 1    | Reading 読解| Read the following an academic subject.


Creative Categorization

Marketing experts do their utmost to induce customers to purchase their products. Often, when faced with a product that, for whatever reason, does not appeal to a large segment of the population,marketers merely change the category it is in. This process is called creative categorization. By doing this, marketers can increase the appeal of a product. The two most common methods of creative categorization are to change the cost or design of a product. By doing so, products may go from being ones purchased by a small number of people to ones with mass appeal.


STEP 2   | Comprehending 読解力テスト | Answer the following questions to make sure you understand the reading


1.  What do marketers attempt to do?

2 What do some marketers do when their products do not appeal to many people?

3 What is creative categorization?

4 What are the two most common ways marketers use creative categorization?

5 According to the passage, what is often the end result of creative categorization?


1 __________________________  

2  __________________________ 

3  ____________________     

4  ____________________      

5  _________________________


Comprehending  解答例



1. Marketers attempt to get people to buy their products.

2. Marketers change the category of their products in these cases.

3. Creative categorization is making a product more appealing by changing the category in which it is included.

4. Marketers often alter either the price of design of a product to change its category.

5. The end result of creative categorization is that the product often develops mass appeal.


▮ Listen

STEP 3 | Listening & Note Taking | Listen to a lecture about the same topic, and take notes.


スクリプト

Imagine you’re a marketing executive and you have some products to sell. There may even be a huge section of society which doesn’t purchase your products. Well, there are a couple of ways to break into that market.You might try changing the price of your product. Did you know, for example, that watches were once regarded as expensive pieces of jewelry? Timepieces used to cost too much for most people. But most of you have watches, right? What happened? Well, one brilliant marketer started touting watches as fashion accessories. Sales of watches leaped dramatically. You can get watches for less than ten dollars nowadays, and they come in all kinds of styles. By changing the category into which watches fell, they began appealing to a greater number of people. Here’s another. Think about cell phones. At first, their use was limited, and only rich people or businessmen used them. However, companies began marketing them to the masses. Now you’ve got kids and grandparents with cell phones these days. Does a six-year-old kid need a phone? Not at all. But marketers have made it so that phones are no longer outrageously expensive. Likewise, they aren’t considered tools only for the rich or for businessmen anymore. They’re fashion devices now, almost like accessories for many people.


Note-Taking メモ取り

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● 質問 Question


The professor describes how two different products began to appeal to a greater number of people. Explain how they are related to creative categorization.



STEP 4 | Organizing  解答の組み立て | Ask yourself the following questions and organize your ideas.

1 What does the professor say about a problem marketing executives may have?

2 According to the professor, what used to be true about watches?

3 How have people’s perceptions of watches changed today?

4 At first, who used to use cell phones?

5 What is true about cell phone usage today?


1   ___________________________________________

2   _________________________________________

3 _______________________________________________

4    _______________________________________

5 _______________________________________________

解答例

1. According to the professor, people often need an explanation when they do not understand something

2. The professor wanted to save some numbers on his cell phone but did not know how.

3. The professor’s friend showed him how to save numbers on his phone step by step.

4. The show .talked about cell phones; however, ultimately, the professor still had no idea how to use his phone.

5. He knew the theory behind how cell phones work but could not put it into practice.

STEP 5 | Response 解答作成| Make your response using the above information.

The subject of the talk is ____________________________________

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The professor states that ____________________________________

____________________ The second example given is__________ ___

As described in the reading, ___________________________________

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▮ Speak

STEP 6   | Speaking 解答| Now say your response out loud, and record your time. While you are speaking, do not look at the written response.


Response time  45 seconds                Your speaking time seconds

STEP 7  | Compare 比較 | Listen to a sample response, and compare it with yours.


Sample Response 模範解答

The subject of the talk is how marketing executives can transform a product with low appeal to one that has mass appeal. The professor states that watches actually used to be very expensive and were considered jewelry. However, this changed when marketers began promoting them as fashion accessories, so now they’re both cheap and prevalent. The second example given is that of cell phones. The professor declares that they were once expensive and used exclusively by rich people and businessmen. However, once companies began marketing them to the masses, now even young children and the elderly have them, often as fashion accessories. As described in the reading, these are both examples of creative categorization. The reading mentions that this is putting an existing product into a new category, often by changing its price or design, in order to make it attractive to more people.


STEP 8 自己採点  


Delivery

1 How clearly did you speak your response?

Language Use

2 How well did you control language structures to convey your ideas?

3 How appropriately did you use vocabulary to convey your ideas?

Topic Development

4 How fully did you answer the question?

5 How coherently did you present your ideas?