{"id":8904,"date":"2019-08-24T15:06:43","date_gmt":"2019-08-24T06:06:43","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.mytutor-jpn.com\/info\/?page_id=8904"},"modified":"2019-08-24T15:06:43","modified_gmt":"2019-08-24T06:06:43","slug":"5%e5%88%86%e3%81%a7%e3%82%8f%e3%81%8b%e3%82%8b%e3%80%82-%e6%8e%a1%e7%82%b9%e8%80%85%e3%81%af%e3%81%93%e3%81%93%e3%82%92%e3%83%81%e3%82%a7%e3%83%83%e3%82%af%e3%81%97%e3%81%a6%e3%81%84%e3%82%8b","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.mytutor-jpn.com\/info\/5%e5%88%86%e3%81%a7%e3%82%8f%e3%81%8b%e3%82%8b%e3%80%82-%e6%8e%a1%e7%82%b9%e8%80%85%e3%81%af%e3%81%93%e3%81%93%e3%82%92%e3%83%81%e3%82%a7%e3%83%83%e3%82%af%e3%81%97%e3%81%a6%e3%81%84%e3%82%8b","title":{"rendered":"5\u5206\u3067\u308f\u304b\u308b\u3002  \u63a1\u70b9\u8005\u306f\u3053\u3053\u3092\u30c1\u30a7\u30c3\u30af\u3057\u3066\u3044\u308b\uff01\u8a55\u4fa1\u57fa\u6e96\u3000Task Achievement"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">IELTS Writing Task 1 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